Haikus for the Seasons

REVISED! I love the feedback my (new) writing teacher gave me.

1.
A winter downpour
Waterfalls frozen in time
Listen, waves of ice

2.

Sunshine like champagne
Daring March seeds pop open
Drunk on morning mist

3.

A loon echoes night
Summer dreams skim deep water
The old song of home

4.

Howling winds fly south
Damp leaves cascade streams of gold
The harvest moon soars

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