REVISED! I love the feedback my (new) writing teacher gave me.
1.
A winter downpour
Waterfalls frozen in time
Listen, waves of ice
2.
Sunshine like champagne
Daring March seeds pop open
Drunk on morning mist
3.
A loon echoes night
Summer dreams skim deep water
The old song of home
4.
Howling winds fly south
Damp leaves cascade streams of gold
The harvest moon soars
Great work emma. Keep inspiring and being that beautifully open book!
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